JEALOUSY...RAWRRRR here we goooooooo...
It's Othello, but I tweaked it to make it work.
Then Othello began to live in jealousy. Jealousy, that green-eyed wicked witch who lives under the house. The great one who waits to jump out from hiding like a snake waiting for its prey. What need has Jealousy for obviousness, and what guards can prevent it from coming out? The witch waits in wonder of what person awaits the change she brings. Waits innocently and vulnerably with her fangs pulled back, waiting for the right moment to strike. Been standing there along with the lying and spying. He was bound to find the witch's legs creep out from under the house any day now. He could not stop it. Poor Othello! He ought not to live by the words of Iago. Desdemona sent Iago to suggest Othello to believe otherwise, but Othello would not listen. Iago wuz all right with giving advice, but he was the one pulling on her legs. He'd be all right just as soon as the two-faced monster showed his true colors. The witch wasn't going to come out at all. That's what Othello thought. But Iago told Desdemona different, so she knew. And then if he hadn't, the next morning she was bound to know, for the witch could no longer be contained under the small white house. A witch that would not dare to set foot on those that could contain her and knew when to stay hidden. Just stayed under the house and waited. Rivalry, that conjurer of destruction, had changed a good man.
16 years ago

I love Othello! :]
ReplyDeleteGood job adding a plot to your piece. It really helps emphasize your meanings in the more abstract parts. And I love the witch references...makes me think of Wicked. :P
It was supposed to be the Wizard of Oz :(
ReplyDeleteOkay, I'm going to go cry in a corner now. Oh wait, I am in a corner.
and my nose is dripping.
lol nice, I like it. a lot better than the real book actually =) anyway yeah, good job, it flowed really well and the plot was really good too. you could write a book and sell it "fo fai hunded dallah!"
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